Short story.
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Lewis



6 posts 2 threads Joined: Feb 2014
01-07-2015, 02:40 PM -
#1
A short story idea that Nauo suggested to me in vague form. Figured I would share it to everyone from the community.

http://www.booksie.com/horror/short_stor...e-carnival
xXSlurpieXx
Forum Noob


391 posts 23 threads Joined: Oct 2014
01-07-2015, 03:09 PM -
#2
Immediately saw breakfast spelled wrong. I'm out.

Just messing. Nice story Smile
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Creepypanda
The Broken One
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494 posts 48 threads Joined: Jan 2014
01-07-2015, 03:52 PM -
#3
I stopped reading it when I saw its over a paragraph long.
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Invader Steeven
Cannot Evade


380 posts 29 threads Joined: Nov 2013
01-07-2015, 04:18 PM -
#4
UGH TOO LAZY TOO READ.
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Lewis



6 posts 2 threads Joined: Feb 2014
01-07-2015, 04:43 PM -
#5
Thanks for noticing the spelling mistake. Woopsie daisy's.

Thanks for the kind words Slurpie.
Windywinnie
swaggist


89 posts 11 threads Joined: Feb 2014
01-08-2015, 07:49 AM -
#6
(01-07-2015, 02:40 PM)Lewis Wrote: A short story idea that Nauo suggested to me in vague form. Figured I would share it to everyone from the community.

http://www.readeroticgayporn.com

Well that was a terrible story, and you need to capitilize "The" and "Carnival" in the title
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Kerry756575WX


2 posts 0 threads Joined: Dec 2018
08-18-2019, 09:52 AM -
#7
Clakclak:

I had some very good advice from an author on this forum. Just write whats in you, look at it refine it then post it. I will be looking forward to seeing you post a story, short or long. I mean you have the ideas I can see that..... so dont be selfish, share them, on this site we all love a story.


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